the first two pages of my Danny phantom Doujinshi project.
Danny Phantom: Rebirth
Back story:
Started out as a concept. Originally was called "DP: Revolution" but "Revolution" was too cliched and polling peeps suggested "rebirth"
the only pages i have done so far is the first prologue, cover, and 2/3 pages of "intro" (danny's origin)
The story will progress to become a "multi-verse" doujin, including "soul reapers" from all of my favourite "ectoplasmic" shows like Bleach (shinigami and Hollows) , Shaman King, and Kingdom Hearts (i'm throwing Heartless in. that's it.) eventually leading to inclusion of other superheroes from DC and Marvel (future/ghost related)
there's a lot more to the story than "beat em up" but i can't disclose that yet otherwise i'd ruin the whole thing before it's started.
ANYWAys.
Please critique. (that and keep in mind there is a reason why pages 3-4's lineart is in pencil. "present" day panels will be inked. "past" will be pencilled and have black panel background)
Updated every Friday (hopefully) 1-2 pages at a time...
READ LEFT TO RIGHT (from this point on, only NEW pages will have the image shown. old ones will be linked)
You know the funny thing is, The first time I read this comic, I was only a DP fan, So I had NO clue who the heck Kurosaki or Inoue were (or anything you put in there from Bleach actually). I became a Bleach fan not to long ago, so now I know what all of that is. Just today, I went back to read this again, just for fun, (I didn't read the desciption telling everything you were putting into the comic), and I saw Ichigo and was like "WHOA!!! WTF?!" I just had to laugh, cause I didn't understand it the first time I read it. Now that I do, Awesom~!
this is one of the best things i have ever seen! BTW, i am new here. i just joined, and i hope to make some new friends. i hope to see additions to the DP:R collection, as i am adding you to my followings.
It would get great reviews!!!!!!! If you do post it on FanFiction.com pleasetell me!!!