Danny Phantom Rebirth page 3+4

This is what you would consider the "Origins" page
for those who've either never seen the show or forgot what the opening was.

Back story:
Started out as a concept. Originally was called "DP: Revolution" but "Revolution" was too cliched and polling peeps suggested "rebirth"

the only pages i have done so far is the first prologue, cover, and 2/3 pages of "intro" (danny's origin)

The story will progress to become a "multi-verse" doujin, including "soul reapers" from all of my favourite "ectoplasmic" shows like Bleach (shinigami and Hollows) , Shaman King, and Kingdom Hearts (i'm throwing Heartless in. that's it.) eventually leading to inclusion of other superheroes from DC and Marvel (future/ghost related)

there's a lot more to the story than "beat em up" but i can't disclose that yet otherwise i'd ruin the whole thing before it's started.

ANYWAys.

Please critique. (that and keep in mind there is a reason why pages 3-4's lineart is in pencil. "present" day panels will be inked. "past" will be pencilled and have black panel background)

Updated every Friday (hopefully) 1-2 pages at a time...
READ LEFT TO RIGHT (from this point on, only NEW pages will have the image shown. old ones will be linked)



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